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.....Kyung Woo’s room is cluttered but convenient. He lives in a studio apartment. There is a super single sized bed, therefore he is able to sleep comfortably. There is also a clothes rack diagonally across from his bed, a dresser on the right side of the clothes rack and a desk on the left side of it. There is a TV on the dresser next to the desk and there is a microwave on the other dresser. There is an aircraft model on the TV and there is a computer on his desk. There is a poster on the window. As you can imagine, Kyung Woo’s room is not big but he can eat, watch TV, play games and sleep in one space.
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Great description of Kyung Woo's room. I can imagine it in my head except for the cluttered part. You need more SS about how it's cluttered. A cluttered place usually has things all over the place.
ReplyDeleteSome suggestions:
1. on the TV
2. There is also a clothes rack diagonally across from his bed, a dresser on the right side of the clothes rack and a desk on the left side of it. (You need to make the sentences blend together by using signal words.)